Writing (Last draft)

Writing

Gowoon Kim
June 29. 2007

Big main idea : Bring a laptop.

I adviced to my friend, because he may go to Iowa next month. When he'll arrive in Iowa, he needs laptop.

First, it needs to work for school connection such as homework, information. If he has homework, he always checks web-site -'ICON', because sometimes teacher are upload today's homework by 'ICON'. However, if he doesn't have laptop, he can't check it right away. Also, some teachers use 'Microsoft word' program, but some laptop haven't this program. Then, when he bring the laptop, he set up this he program. Besides, he gets much information easily by laptop. When arrives in Iowa, he finds school dormitory information. At that time, he'll use his laptop, he finds this information to convenient. In addition, people concerned IIEP use 'ISIS' web-site. There are much information, especially, U-bill, health insurance money and some ID card money. He checks these, and pays for that.

Second, if he bring a laptop, it's very useful, because he can enjoy cultural life, and when he feels bored. Also, sometimes he can watch movies and listen to music, but he doesn't have laptop, he is always going to movie theater, or he doesn't enjoy that. Specially, watching movies and listening to music are helped to study English. Also, communication with Korean friends, family, or foreigner by using laptop. Moreover, when he feels very boring, he plays games, information retrieval, and reads news. When he has free time, he can find information retrieval such as English site, or English news by using laptop. Then, his English ability is upgrade.